crappy little poems
attempting to express
the feelings that I felt with you
the passion that we shared.
overwhelmed and overtaken
it was so intense; you and I
never have I felt that way
it blew my mind and thine.
funny how things work out
in love and life itself
we waited more than a year for that
but I think we then suprised ourselves
I love you
unabashedly I admit it
my first urge
when I got home
was to call and tell you
about this amazing girl I'd met
who blew my mind and all
then of course I realized
that you were that girl indeed
but that stopped me not a bit
from choosing to make that call.
















Comments
i love that line.
i want to know if the girl rejects or accepts you. sorry to put that so bluntly i dont mean to sound rude.
i like this poem. it expresses whats happening in your life. its like a little scene in a movie put into words.
it wasn't rude.
thanks for the comment
I didn't know my life was like a movie, I don't know if that's a good thing or not.
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I walk with her, and I hear the gentle beating of mighty wings
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I walk with her, and I hear the gentle beating of mighty wings
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It's about me.
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"He is my disciple no more. Beat the drum, my little ones, and attack him; you have my permission."
I'm glad you can relate.. well actually, I'm sorry you can, but yeah...
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I walk with her, and I hear the gentle beating of mighty wings
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yes, it's about you , I'm madly and desperatly in love with you
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I walk with her, and I hear the gentle beating of mighty wings
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what better person to be with than the one you want to
pick up the phone with and call. Amazing? are you sure..
^.^
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I walk with her, and I hear the gentle beating of mighty wings
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